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Fee
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2000-08-15 08:19 AM


Sit in Silence and Listen Hard
to the emotions  
from your heart
Let your thoughts
come from within
Sit in Silence
and begin
Find the Truth
in what you hear
It's Your thoughts
There's nothing to fear
Listen hard
to what you've said
Collect your thoughts
from inside your head
Honesty and Truth
can only be herd
from so many of
Your unspoken words



© Copyright 2000 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
BreyerRose
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since 2000-08-12
Posts 55
Easton, Pa USA
1 posted 2000-08-15 08:34 AM


Fee,
Honestly, I like this piece.  So many times we don't always say what we mean, for whatever reasons.  Sometimes even, we're not sure how we feel about someone or something until we look inside ourselves and really examine our thought and feeling about it/them.  Nicely put.

Hugs and Kisses,
Paula


Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
2 posted 2000-08-16 06:06 PM


Words of wisdom - you've expressed yourself very well  


Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-08-16 06:20 PM


Hello Fee....
             So very thoughtful, this one, and I don't mean that as a pun, either! Sometimes it's hard to listen to our thoughts as we hear the truth and may not want to. But in any case...I always felt very grateful that we were designed in such a way as to not hear anyone else's thoughts! Very good writing, my friend!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-08-16 07:34 PM


Lovey sentiments Fee, and Welcome to Passions!  I've often pondered many the same thoughts you've penned so insightfully here, very nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2000-08-16 07:42 PM


Hi Fee,
Welcome to Passions, it is a wonderful place, as you will see. Loved your work, just keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Daniel_vv
Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61

6 posted 2000-08-16 07:55 PM


Emotions don't exsist, they are just feelings.

Nice thoughts in this one!

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