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Sweetheart I Need You
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Sweetheart I Need You |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sweetheart I Need You Some say they like me. Some say they care. Some call me on the phone or page me with precious time to share. When they say they like you they like to see you hurt. They Love to make you angry. They Love to call you a jerk. I don't really trust women cause they lied to me before. They told me they cared for me then walked right out the door. All the pain I feel I don't want to reveal. It would break my heart again. I can only hope somewhere close at hand is a special woman who will understand that my heart can be true and all I really want from this life is to Love the woman that needs me. And Sweetheart I Need You. Jameslee@August15,2000 |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Trust me James ... we, at Passions love you!  Beautiful, touching words, from a man full of heart. I so hope you meet that special lady soon! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
what is up with all these posts today? They are all making me cry!! This is a beautiful, touching poem..believe me when I say that I can totally relate to your words, from a female point of view. Guys have been doing the same thing to me for years! I can only dream that someday I will meet my soulmate...great piece!......beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A very touching piece, James. You seem to be getting better and better with each post. This is another great piece and thanks for sharing. Nathan |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
How could any woman refuse you James??? Well you know that I can't!!! How far is the Big Island from me?? LOL  Your pen is at it's finest today my friend. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very sad and touching. One day you will find your soul mate. I've told all my friends who are looking for "Mr. or Mrs. Right" that they need to become "Mr. or Mrs. Right" and then you will be found. I see you have probably become "Mr. Right", "Mrs. Right" will find you hon, trust me!!!! There is someone for everyone, some just take longer than others. Hugs, Heather Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
So touching and so tender... James, this is very well written ... regards, sudhir |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A plea of your heart.....a beautiful read James, It can be a rough road to "the one"...but it's worth the trip...even if it doesn't feel like it. Great work...heart written and heart felt~ |
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Knight Dreams Junior Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 46Austin, Texas |
Done with style James. Your lady seems closer than you might think |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
my heart can be true beautiful sentiments ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Kit, beth, Nate, Marina, heather, Sudhir, Butterfly, KnightDreams, and Maureen for the lovely commnents. Marina I live on the island of Oahu..the gathering place...the one with the city of Honolulu. Women seem to enjoy making me wait...perhaps for my own good...because sometimes I feel like a fool rushing in. If only I knew a woman like you in Hawaii...but I will if patience and determination have their way...thanks for being so sweet...I needed that...James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
O my O my, this one is soooooo sweet James. The beat of a heart so tender and loving just takes my breath away! I'm keeping this one in private library to readNreadNread ThankU for sharing Hugz Coco |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Coco for the sweet comments...James |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Such heart felt words touching my heart again. Loved it. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I always enjoy reading your poetry. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Wonderful write here. I can understand the whole trust issue you touched on in this. Funny, we all want the same thing, basicly when it comes to love.....makes me wonder why it is so hard to get. Or the real kick in the butt....you get it and then for some reason you can't be together. Geeesh....makes ya wonder. Stay Sweet. Jenn E |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...keep that heart open...she is out there...maybe where you least expect to find her...I lived on Oahu for three years.. |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
What a beautiful and heart warming piece James. It is often said that when you stop looking for the "Right One" they will find YOU. I wish you the best in your venture and with a wonderful attitude as you have, it is bound to happen when you least expect it. hugs and kisses to you, you sweet, sweet man! |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
sweet poem indeed...do not give hope...that soul mate of your is out there...and you will meet one day, but for the time being stay strong enjoyed the poem much "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Susan, vandana, Jenn, Paula, beme, and eve for the wonderful responses.. Paula a warm Aloha to you...I love the beaches...the diving...do you miss Hawaii?...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful plea from the heart and how could she ever refuse. Excellent write my friend. |
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