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Ooh, Yeah, Baby !
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Ooh, Yeah, Baby ! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Ooh,Yeah, Baby ! ~*Marge Tindal*~ Walkin' down the street like ya' own the place ! Look at that strut all over the place ! Tight blue jeans, snuggly fit Drawing attention to the fact that you're hip ! That taunt muscle shirt ain't hiding the fact, so divine That you work hard at looking so gosh-darned fine ! Whoopee, gals Come take a look ! The new guy in town is one for the books ! You come in here struttin' I'm thinking - well maybe We're gonna be looking Ooh, yeah Baby ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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TheBlindMan Junior Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 20Cape Cod, MA |
Thanks Marge, You entered this at a moment when the laugh was medicine to my soul! |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Hi there Marge, Gosh you get replies quick to your poems... must be the sheer talent that drives them in droves straight to your poems. I thoroughly enjoyed it, a bit of fun too. Oh yeah, did I tell you I love your Poetry Site... ooops I did tell you that yesterday.  Linda M. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Well, BlindMan~ I'm just more than happy to tickle your fancy ! I think it's a 'moon thang' !  *Smiles* Linda~ Hi there, gal ! Thanks for stopping by. You did tell me and I thank you sincerely ! I love seeing my midnight friends come out to play ! The 'luna-tics' are out tonight and I'm leading the pack !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Nice poem Marge, just don't break your neck! .*.*.*.KrissiE.*.*.*. I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making you lose ur way I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel ~Touch and Go |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge....you control yourself now!!!!! this was great and fun and now I have to go clean my glasses so I can see the sights!!! Save me a seat!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Marge, A very fun loving poem to say the least. Had a smile on my face as soon as I knew what you were writing about lolStrive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge, was he drinking a can of Coke? Reminds me of that Coke commercial, you know, where the guy takes off his shirt for his break and downs a Coke at 11:30 every day? Not that I recall the details of course! LOL Thanks for sharing this! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AniKay~ Nice to see the curious guys and gals out tonight .... Wahooooooo ! Sunny1~ Girlfriend .... don't have to ! Come on .. room for all of us to gawk !  ThUnDeRkYsS~ Why you naughty_b0yee, you ! Glad to see you come stuttin' for us mid-night gals ! Glad to get a smile out of you ! Corinne~ EXACTLY ! Sorry 'bout that amnesia !  I tell you all - I just know it's got to be the moon ! ~*Maniacal Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Now you know why we women go 10 mph in those work zones along the highway. Wouldn't want to knock over anyone in tight jeans! This is priceless, Marge! Got me laughing this morning Hope you don't mind if I print this one out for Christina Love Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Print away, my sweet ! It's reminiscent of that 'hard-hat' syndrome, right ? RIGHT ! I just knew you'd get a kick out of it ! Me ? I'm taking the 10 MPH route to work today ! ! Love ya' gal ..... Keep smiling ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Great poem Marge ... boy I wish I was living where you are! All I see anymore are baggy pants down to their ankles! LOL Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Come on down ! A treat to behold. I must tattle ... Tee-Hee ! Lizzie Lady turned me on to the view ! Shhhhhhh ! Been looking ever since ! And looking ... and looking ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Keep looking Marge... This world is a pleasure to watch and then write down in your own words.. that would please this selfish reader a great deal... What a fun fest it becomes to read such wonderful poems... regards and smiles Sudhir |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
very enjoyable as always..I actually love reading all your responses but it takes up so much of the morning ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
very enjoyable as always..I actually love reading all your responses but it takes up so much of the morning  ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Knight Dreams Junior Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 46Austin, Texas |
LOL...Gosh Marge...where you been hanging out at? Hehe. Great wake up call this morning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Yep ! And I'm still looking ! It's fun to write them too ! Thank you. Maureen~ Maureen~ LOL ! And you just added your fair share ! TWICE ...... Oh, I LOVE it ! ! KnightDream~ Welcome to the read ! Just slowing down to cruise the 'Hard-Hat' Construction Sites along the Florida highways .... LOL ! Thanks for the reply ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge-you have such a wit...just love running across one of yours to brighten my day. Now will you speed up a little please....us guys who arent so blessed just need to get on with it.LOL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Honey, I ain't never seen a cowboy in a hurry ... 'cepting he was a'running AFTER a woman ... or FROM the Marshall ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Marge, this is tooo cute!! ...and, reading the great replies I am left to say...if this helped the TheBlindMan's spirits, then I just know I feel better. LOL Marcy |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Marge, This was great...a good laugh. Thanks! Michael |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
hehehehe.....this is cute, Marge! Now, while you're watching where he's going, don't forget to watch where you're going...wouldn't want you walking into a lamp post...hehehe Denise |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge-this cowboy is always in a hurry for his woman....her get up and go is just a hair faster than me with my little hitch.LOLOL...But my endurance will win I have no doubt. |
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