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I Can Dance this Song
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I Can Dance this Song |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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I Can Dance this Song Wine distill me moisten my day to steam around me in somnolent play. The ocean clasps the shore line feet that jump the froth and dance the beat. I can dance this song I can feel the strum sweet full moon in spin along. Sweet guitar stills me taut strings weight fingers pull the sound from heaven’s gate. Oh crease this sheet in rhythms strong touch my sorrow sing my song. I can dance this song I can feel the strum sweet full moon in spin along. Morning comes I hear the cry be still now baby and let me fly. [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Martie~ I love it ! We are just singing and dancing on this full-moon night ! Moona-Luna-tics are we all ! Love ya', Coasty Gal !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
my favorite - may I have the next dance Madam?  - wonderful Martie |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Martie..... Oh yes.....let's all dance!!! I notice you have a guitar, can I bring my keyboard, too? Loved this, and it got my feet going!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sweet guitar stills me taut strings weight fingers pull the sound from heaven’s gate. How sweet he music....how could we not dance sweet Martie......just love a good ole fashion get together beneath the moon....VERY COOL POEM!!!!!!!   yeahhhhh babyyyyyy. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--We two under the moon...gotta love it!! and you! Wil--The next dance is your, kind sir...lets cha cha cha! Sunny--bring your keyboard...please...we can all sing too. Mark--Yes, how could we not! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Martie,...sweet Martie, this is happening! Yep!!! Ya got my heart swaying this morning. Mmhm. Take care. *Peace. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
LOVE the structure... LOVE the image... this dances hon K |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I'd fly or dance with you anytime Martie. Wonderful poetry. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I loved this: Morning comes I hear the cry be still now baby and let me fly.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Martie, please invite me next time...I miss this so....lovely lady poet you! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gee, Martie, you sound a little wanton here....and I'm a wantin' to dance with you!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie, so many sides to this! Well done! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Martie* I love the entire thing but the last stanza blew me away!! Beautiful work~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Spit fire--the heart is the most perfect instament...thanks. Kamla--I'm always so glad to see you! Do you have time to dance? Hope so! Mike--If you could fly...then we could dance Lakewalker--Thanks for letting me know... Serenity sweet--you are invited! Deer--this wanton one wants to dance with you too! Sunshine--Thanks for seeing that..you have a good eye. Butterflies in the wind..blown beauty. |
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