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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-08-14 11:39 PM





Oh, look it's
just that moon thang
That orb of glowing light
so hung up on itself Shining
in the night You'd think that
some magic had happened But
that big sky just has a peep
hole Other worlds watching
us and wondering why we
look with mouth agape
Think on that





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Eloise
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1 posted 2000-08-14 11:43 PM


What a wonderful orb poem you have painted here.  Had to run to the window and take a peek!  
Martie
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2 posted 2000-08-14 11:48 PM


Marge--You have made me smile a moon smile...thank you!
Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2000-08-14 11:50 PM


Marge~

One of the most beautiful sights to behold.....the full moon in all his glory.  You have captured it wonderfully my friend.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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4 posted 2000-08-14 11:55 PM


I'm indeed thinking on that my friend...beautiful words and a beautiful format to match..I just might have to go take a peek at the moon myself!  

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-08-15 02:02 AM



Eloise~
So glad to catch
you in the light of that
glorious moon with Martie~
I love it cause I know you see
the same beauty in it that I do
LoneWolf~ Well so glad to see you
like it too !  Krista~ Peek-A-Boo
Just remember, someone may
just be looking back at you
and me and all of us
moon worshipers
out here


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2000-08-15 02:34 AM


Marge-so what you are tellin me is that all those nights with me SWEETNESS under the moonlite we were being watched .....peeked at.....they saw everything?  cheeeeeezzzz...no wonder it seemed to wink at us...LOL  Loved it Marge.
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-08-15 02:44 AM



Cowboy~
Who cares if
they were watching
Gave 'em something
to write home about
Shhh !  I'll never,
ever tell .. Shh!
*Hugs*



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EagleOne
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8 posted 2000-08-15 03:44 AM


Something to think on indeed.  

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



ma miller
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9 posted 2000-08-15 08:14 AM


how clever, Marge ... and a beautiful verse to boot ... well done
Janet Marie
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10 posted 2000-08-15 09:29 AM


oooohhhh margie just mooned us and it was SO lovely  
very cool-
I do so enjoy seeing poets play with their poetry lol
later-(wo)man-in-the-moon-gator
jm

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11 posted 2000-08-15 09:47 AM


~Hello there Miss Marge! I'm glowing this morning after reading your poem...thank you for allowing me to start my day bright. (and whole).  . You, and these totally captivating and artistically painted works are just the best! Take care MT. *Peace.
Alicat
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12 posted 2000-08-15 10:41 AM


Hehehe....very creative harvest moon.  Just wish them there blasted Moonies would stop mooning me!  Where that buckshot at?


Alicat, the Persnikitty

Paula Finn
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13 posted 2000-08-15 10:53 AM


Clever very clever...and who knows...if they can see us...doesnt that mean we can see them?   peep
Sudhir Iyer
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14 posted 2000-08-16 05:30 AM


Marge,
Another wonderfully beautiful Moon from you...
you are a full moon person...
full of hopes and full of exuberance and life.. I wish for you to remain that the entire lifetime and more...

regards,
sudhir.
P.S. one of these days I am going to be writing about the phases of moon and dedicate it to you.... I sincerely hope to make this come true...

Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2000-08-16 07:31 AM


Oh, EagleOne~
Just you keep on thinking
with MAMiller~ and JanetMarie~
how clever the moon does beam with
SpitFire~ glowing so bright and AliCat~
waiting to be 'mooned' Such friends of
my making and chances I'm taking to
watch this glow in the night Paula~
seems to be lost in the dreams
of just who's looking back
Sudhir~ I wait



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2005-11-15 10:04 AM




Delaney says so !

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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