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It's Just A Moon Thang !

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Marge Tindal
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Oh, look it's
just that moon thang
That orb of glowing light
so hung up on itself Shining
in the night You'd think that
some magic had happened But
that big sky just has a peep
hole Other worlds watching
us and wondering why we
look with mouth agape
Think on that





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Eloise
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1 posted 08-14-2000 11:43 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

What a wonderful orb poem you have painted here.  Had to run to the window and take a peek!  
Martie
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2 posted 08-14-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Marge--You have made me smile a moon smile...thank you!
Lone Wolf
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3 posted 08-14-2000 11:50 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Marge~

One of the most beautiful sights to behold.....the full moon in all his glory.  You have captured it wonderfully my friend.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats
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4 posted 08-14-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I'm indeed thinking on that my friend...beautiful words and a beautiful format to match..I just might have to go take a peek at the moon myself!  

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis
Marge Tindal
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Eloise~
So glad to catch
you in the light of that
glorious moon with Martie~
I love it cause I know you see
the same beauty in it that I do
LoneWolf~ Well so glad to see you
like it too !  Krista~ Peek-A-Boo
Just remember, someone may
just be looking back at you
and me and all of us
moon worshipers
out here


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mark Bohannan
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Marge-so what you are tellin me is that all those nights with me SWEETNESS under the moonlite we were being watched .....peeked at.....they saw everything?  cheeeeeezzzz...no wonder it seemed to wink at us...LOL  Loved it Marge.
Marge Tindal
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Cowboy~
Who cares if
they were watching
Gave 'em something
to write home about
Shhh !  I'll never,
ever tell .. Shh!
*Hugs*



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


EagleOne
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8 posted 08-15-2000 03:44 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Something to think on indeed.  

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


ma miller
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9 posted 08-15-2000 08:14 AM       View Profile for ma miller   Email ma miller   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ma miller

how clever, Marge ... and a beautiful verse to boot ... well done
Janet Marie
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10 posted 08-15-2000 09:29 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

oooohhhh margie just mooned us and it was SO lovely  
very cool-
I do so enjoy seeing poets play with their poetry lol
later-(wo)man-in-the-moon-gator
jm
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11 posted 08-15-2000 09:47 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Hello there Miss Marge! I'm glowing this morning after reading your poem...thank you for allowing me to start my day bright. (and whole).  . You, and these totally captivating and artistically painted works are just the best! Take care MT. *Peace.
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12 posted 08-15-2000 10:41 AM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Hehehe....very creative harvest moon.  Just wish them there blasted Moonies would stop mooning me!  Where that buckshot at?


Alicat, the Persnikitty
Paula Finn
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13 posted 08-15-2000 10:53 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

Clever very clever...and who knows...if they can see us...doesnt that mean we can see them?   peep
Sudhir Iyer
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14 posted 08-16-2000 05:30 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Marge,
Another wonderfully beautiful Moon from you...
you are a full moon person...
full of hopes and full of exuberance and life.. I wish for you to remain that the entire lifetime and more...

regards,
sudhir.
P.S. one of these days I am going to be writing about the phases of moon and dedicate it to you.... I sincerely hope to make this come true...
Marge Tindal
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15 posted 08-16-2000 07:31 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, EagleOne~
Just you keep on thinking
with MAMiller~ and JanetMarie~
how clever the moon does beam with
SpitFire~ glowing so bright and AliCat~
waiting to be 'mooned' Such friends of
my making and chances I'm taking to
watch this glow in the night Paula~
seems to be lost in the dreams
of just who's looking back
Sudhir~ I wait



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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Delaney says so !

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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