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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-08-14 07:02 PM


Do you like the rain in your face?
Do you like to be vulnerable?
Always so smooth and cool....
Do I have a chance to get to know you?
I need to know
Do you like making angels in the snow?
Skinny dipping in the rain?
Or are you just a little bit shy?
I hope you've got the time...
Do you want what I want?
Do you like to be totally excited?
Have we got anything in common?

I've saved every letter...
they just keep getting better
And I think I like you
liking you more and more each day
and I think I need to get to know you
better than just like this
and I need to know what would happen
If we kissed

Your words speak to me
Who's this guy?
Who are you?
Taking you with me when I sleep
I don't want to scare you off
I can get a little deep
Just a picture of a man
with deep dark eyes
Is it imaginary confidence?
Or do I really like this guy?
So far a vision in my mind
Wonder what his voice would sound like
If he whispered in my ear
Would his breath give me shivers down my spine
Seems of late the only thing on my mind
I think I'd like to find the time

And I've saved every letter...
they just keep getting better
And I think I like you
liking you more and more each day
and I think I need to get to know you
better than just like this
and I need to know what would happen
If we kissed



Julie :)



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T McCoy
Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186

1 posted 2000-08-14 07:29 PM


personally...i love the rain!  
but that's just me...
i'm sure that kissing this guy would be pretty nice since you're obviously thinking about it...
follow your dreams, girl!

Tony  

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2000-08-14 08:17 PM


Hi JulieAnn,
Yes, yes, yes, to everything!!!!! How precious you write and put your thoughts into this poem. I did like what I read.

ddgoose
Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250
Baltimore, MD, USA
3 posted 2000-08-14 08:26 PM


JulieAnn

Go for it girl!  You certainly have a way with words.  Great job.

didi

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
4 posted 2000-08-14 08:54 PM


JulieAnn... I must say, you really know how to push all those little buttons!!!    Wow... beautiful, intruiging, alluring.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
5 posted 2000-08-14 10:47 PM


Tony~~thank you for that bit of advice...if it wasn't for the distance....who knows...

Bill~~that is sweet of you....thank you for reading...glad you enjoyd it...

Thank you DiDi...Just something I wrote for someone I have been in contact with recently....I hope he liked it since I am sure he read it....

Thunderkyss~~Little buttons??....i guess it is working then....Thank you so much...

Julie :)



Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
6 posted 2000-08-19 03:58 PM


JulieAnn...dont know how I missed this the first time thru but I am glad I found it today....nice write here
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

7 posted 2000-08-19 04:02 PM


~I know I like your writing,...in fact, I think it's great. What a read! Thanks. *Peace.
ladysixstring
Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374

8 posted 2000-08-19 04:23 PM


Great job!!! This was fun to read!!!

-jaimie
www.ladysixstring.com



JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
9 posted 2000-08-19 09:02 PM


Paula~~Thanks for reading.....and thank you for your kind reply....

Spitfire~I am gald you like my writing....and thank you for reading....

jaimie~~Thank you it was kind of fun to write too.....thanks for reading!!  

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