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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
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0 posted 2000-08-14 02:36 AM


Put your head on my chest
while your feeling blue
know that now you can rest
so I can comfort you

Put your hand in my hand
while we're sitting here
and know I'm always your man
just want to feel you near

I'll put my arms around you
to show you what I need
I'll hug you, hold you, squeeze you
to bring you close to me

I'll kiss away your worries
so you can ease your mind
I'll do it slow, wont hurry
wont ever "not have time"

I'll tell you how I Love you
so you'll never feel alone
and that there's none above you
your tenderness has shown

I always want you with me
no matter what we do
I Love who sits before me
Love you and only you.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



© Copyright 2000 B.J.Howe - All Rights Reserved
Rosalind Palafox
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1 posted 2000-08-14 02:51 AM


This is so beautiful...awe....

"Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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2 posted 2000-08-14 03:25 AM


just what every woman wants to hear...thank you...I'll read again, close my eyes and pretend...
MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
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3 posted 2000-08-14 03:32 AM


I'll kiss away your worries
so you can ease your mind
I'll do it slow, wont hurry
wont ever "not have time"


love this TK...besides the rest..very well done and ohhh so sensitive...
~~softly wishing I was younger or you were older...
*teazin you...
Maureen

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-08-14 03:33 AM


beautiful words of devotion ...
loves sanctuary...put into verse
lucky lady...
lovely poetry
take care
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~


ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
5 posted 2000-08-14 07:26 PM


Thank you all so very much for your kind replies and words of encouragement.  And by the way Janet, there really is no lucky lady at the moment... LOL  Just the way I've been feeling a bit lately, missing all these things    You know, when it's not there is always when you think about it most   LOLOL  So you guys will have to bear with me while I get it out of my system and quit being such a sap. (smiling)  LOL.  Thank you again

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming
6 posted 2000-08-14 07:29 PM


This is so beautiful and romantic.  I think I will go back for one more read.  
ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
7 posted 2000-08-15 12:33 PM


Eloise ~ Thank you so much for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it  
JnR4eva
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 377
Bronx, NY
8 posted 2000-08-15 02:02 AM


awww this is too beautiful...you have captured the very essense of love    this piece is absolutely sweet and beautiful, I enjoyed it very much.  

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
9 posted 2000-08-15 08:16 AM


Words mean nothing without feeling...and you put so much feeling into these words that they glow.....excellent writing...this is a beautiful piece...feel free to "sap" out anytime..

[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 08-15-2000).]

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
10 posted 2000-08-15 10:19 AM


Lovely tribute to the one you love.

Corinne

susanbartee
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since 2000-08-15
Posts 119
Channelview, TX USA
11 posted 2000-08-15 05:05 PM


Your special one is so very lucky to have a man with such a sensitive, loving heart. This is just what most women are looking for in a man. You have a special gift and I look forward to reading more of your poems.
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
12 posted 2000-08-15 11:38 PM


Another great poem by you, A girl could get lost in your words you know! What would be nice is to see these words fly off the net and become a reality, to see and feel them in action! WOW!!!
ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
13 posted 2000-08-16 11:36 PM


JnR4eva ~ Thank you so much, I'm still learning about this every day, but someday... lol

Buterflies ~ When I write like this I'm not happy unless I can read it and almost feel what I'm writing about... You are too kind    Thank you

Corinne ~ Thank you, I'll have to say this is more of a tribute to the one I may Love someday, when I find her   LOL

susanbartee ~ Well, again, there really is no special one right now in my life... and unfortunately, it's been my experience that these days these are'nt the qualities most women are looking for in a man.  {Sigh}   Thank you.

A Romantic Heart ~ You'd better be careful, you could make my head explode you know lol  Thank you so much, you're too kind  

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
14 posted 2000-08-17 09:02 AM


Oh my - so much SAP in here, it's darn near *sticky*!!!     j/k  This is another wonderfully warm sappy work of yours, so glad I didn't miss it!  You are GOOD at this, but let me warn you, now that you've announced your "singleness", I fear for your safety in here!  ROFL  And I'm not sure where you've been looking for women, but as far as these "qualities" of yours - they are exactly what MOST women WANT!  You must be looking in the "one-night-stands" section of the yellow pages boy!  ROFL  There is someone absolutely wonderful for you out there who will appreciate who you are inside - protecting, loving, romantic, and handsome to boot!     Be patient, and I have a feeling a stampede of women are just around the forum corner!   I love how you held the character in this...nothing better than a man who gives a strong woman a shoulder to lean on from time to time.  That's a truly strong union. **sigh** I'll hush now!  More SAP more SAP!
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