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Haiku for You++++Set #2 |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Ride with me, my love... We will fly to stars above... On wings of fire light... I will take your hand... Do not try to understand... Love has set the course... The moon gives us night... In the fullness of her light... I melt into you... With the break of day... Sun is spinning golden rays... We must journey on... < !signature--> Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-14-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Read three Haiku now then read just two tomorrow I bet you are hooked I warned and warned.....rofl Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Jamie.... Yes, you did warn, and I just didn't listen!!!! They really are a lot of fun!! Thank you....I needed a chuckle right now. Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
SIGH...I wish I could do that |
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jfilius Junior Member
since 2000-08-14
Posts 29 |
It looks like the sun has spun its golden rays on you! Very nice. John |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Paula.... You CAN do that..... Thank you..... Hello John.... I appreciate your nice reply! Thank you.... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ THANK YOU ! Now I can reply ... For some reason some browsers don't like the ( )'s or the [ ]'s in the title lately. This is a lovely grouping of thoughts. I like what you've done with them. Keep it up ... they are addicting to write and to read !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yes they are addicting to read and some day I will venture to the realms of writing them for a new addiction...you have put these together quite well and each on its own is a gift but as a group they are treasures for sure. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Sunny1, Beautiful progression in this haiku collection! Snapshot of treasured moments! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mark...... You should jump right into this form of writing...it is so much fun, and like Jamie warns, extremely addictive!! Glad you liked them... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Dennis.... Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed these..... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I agree,...these are addicting to read. More please. This was great. Take care now. *Peace. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi SpitFire....(I like that handle!!) Thank you, and I'm glad you came by to read. Yes, these little pieces are such fun........ give it a try!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sunny1,you know,I have always liked your poetry.As always beautiful poem!!!!! Ride with me, come fly to the stars above!!!!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
vandana.... I'm so pleased that you stopped by for a visit!! I hope this little bit of work allowed you to take a magic ride for a few moments! Thank you so much! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Sunny BEWARE - addiction - read Sunny's poems. I love them. I will be looking for the next one. didi |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, You have the words, you have the expressions, your have your heart, tender and revealing. I do enjoy what you write Sunny. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
didi.... You are so nice...thank you!! Actually, I AM addicted to this form of writing, but I don't know much about it yet, except that it's fun!! Hi Bill.... My heart is pretty much an open book.....but some read it better than others! Thank you, my friend!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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