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insect
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0 posted 2000-08-13 09:35 PM


Drunken Fool

Just one more drink then we can leave
Honey you’re a goddess, I do believe
Help me get up after this drink
And slow down this room it's hard to think
Thanks for asking, I'd love to dance
But as you can see I pissed my pants
Hey wait for me I'm not that drunk
I've got a change of clothes in my trunk
Ah don't worry, I can drive
All these years and I'm still alive
Same to you baby, your not so cool
What do you take me for, a drunken fool



[This message has been edited by insect (edited 08-14-2000).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-08-13 09:38 PM


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Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


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insect
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2 posted 2000-08-13 09:41 PM


Sorry i had to edit but thanks for your reply
Thanks sunshine

Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-08-13 09:42 PM


Yes, insect, this is not the poem to which I replied.
insect
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4 posted 2000-08-13 09:46 PM


When I seen it that it didn't turn out the way I wanted, I tried to edit before anyone
could see it but you were to fast for me
Sorry again and I hope you get a laugh from this one
I guess I've had one to many LOL  


[This message has been edited by insect (edited 08-13-2000).]

Paula Finn
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missouri
5 posted 2000-08-14 02:24 AM


Should I laugh or take your keys?
kat
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6 posted 2000-08-14 10:53 PM


Oh leave me alone
Can't you see I'm drunk too
I would have been fine
If it wasn't for you
And you're right about that
I'm not so cool
Someone open the windows
Oh God! I'm starting to drool
Geez!! Take your hands off me
I didn't ask you to dance
All I said was
Get the heck out of those pants!
Come on! Lets go now!
Before they lock us in
I've got a whopper of a headache
Will you stop that singing?
Oh wipe off that crazy grin
LOL

I'm glad you brought this one back! I love it!! LOL

  

kat



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