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Molten Fudge Sundae
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Molten Fudge Sundae |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Molten Fudge Sundae Swallowed minutes within courses of time looming silently caressed in ignorance spiced illusions to ward away possible pain traced seasons twistedly delivered as wished. Master actor caught within his own cruel act blossomed statements force deceptive scenes, here yet gone bouncing on loosened tightrope tumbling emotions crushing his leading lady. Yesterdays stiff taffy beginnings ever so sweet today's sour milk curdled in apparent guilt tomorrow's iced cream flooded serene destiny became warped in his molten fudge sundae. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent expression, Gloria. Illusions can be powerful making us believe whatever we need to believe at the time. This is really good, Gloria. Denise |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I was impressed by the title, chocolate- lover that I am, and then I became engrossed with the phrases and images!! Wonderfully tasty!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
such interesting flavors we encounter in our lives... some tastier than others..  |
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