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Venue To A Story |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Venue to a Story He came to see the Woman in White in only the way he could and while he stroked the Woman in White the Lady in Red sat as if wood. If this entreats you, please visit "Lady in Red ~ Woman in White" in the Passions in Prose Forum. /pip/Forum15/HTML/000865.html Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Went.....checked it out....and loved it...go see!!!! Your prose to this had me in so much anticipation that I found myself holding my breath at times. The ending was perfect and it goes to show that the appreciation of ones love is never really blinded if given from the heart. Lovely.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, thank you! That you held your breath is a compliment indeed. Perhaps you could write from the Lady in Red's viewpoint? Let me know if that happens... by the way, have I told you lately that it is a pleasure indeed to know that you are among my favored fans? A blessing you are, indeed. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Karilea... I am being enticed to do just that.... but I am holding off the reading to a time when time is more generous... (that sounds like tomorrow... or even earlier  )...regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, I hope you will enjoy it...thank you... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The view point is in the works....Being not of nature it will take me a bit longer as I only accept knowing that I will be able to grow in doing so. Be patient and you will not be disappointed. (a fan)and treasured one at that.LOL |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I shall look forward to your treasured piece... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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