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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-08-13 08:11 PM



You are like a light...
With beacon shining brightly...
That guides me homeward...


For all of my days...
I will forever follow...
Wherever you go...


I will climb mountains...
I will swim the deepest sea...
I will have your love...


Take this lonely heart...
Give me back love and passion...
Guide me to your shore...
< !signature-->

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
    'the Present'!






[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-14-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2000-08-13 08:14 PM


Whew Sunny, I need say no more!
Sunnyone
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2 posted 2000-08-13 08:20 PM


  
Hi Bill...
           I hope that was a good "whew"!!
           I dearly love Haiku...it fills
           the craving of my poetic sweet
           tooth!!!
               Good to see you here!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2000-08-13 09:30 PM


Sunny1 beautiful as always
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-08-13 09:33 PM


All these strolls along the beaches of the forum these days are making all the lovers come out and play and making me wish I were back in Florida.     Lovely Haikus....now where are the rest? Your haikus take me there and to the mountains and back again....how sweet can that be?

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-13-2000).]

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
5 posted 2000-08-13 09:44 PM


Hi Paula....

         thank you and I'm glad that you
         read and enjoyed!!!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
6 posted 2000-08-13 09:48 PM


Mark...
        Very, Very sweet. These will be sets
    of Haikus for the gypsy souls that seem
    to be many here. With imagination turned
    loose, how far can we wander??

              
                 Thank you, my friend!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada
7 posted 2000-08-13 10:27 PM


My Oh My.......these are beautiful Sunny1. I agree with mark...     all of this talk of walks on distant shores.....makes us all want to be somewhere.......
These have expressed feelings I have inside myself and I thank you. Such few words yet says so very very much.......I hope one day I am guided to his shore where I feel in my heart I was ment to be.
My heart has just sighed a reflective sigh of thought.
Jenn E

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
8 posted 2000-08-13 11:22 PM



Jenn E.....
           I thank you so much. Sometimes
       it's good to take a little mental
       journey.....good for the soul!!!< !signature-->

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
    'the Present'!




[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-14-2000).]

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
9 posted 2000-08-13 11:35 PM


There should be a warning on all these beautiful Haiku...Caution Addictive

Imagine that..lol
jamie



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
10 posted 2000-08-14 06:59 AM


Jamie....
         Warning duly noted....I agree, this
         is very addictive....I find myself
         talking in Haiku!!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
11 posted 2000-08-14 07:03 AM


Sunny1~
Yahoo !  Two for two !

These are simply delightful.
You've been bit by the bug !
Will watch for more ...
cause everybody knows ....
they never stop flowing ! !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
12 posted 2000-08-14 07:18 AM


Hi Marge.....

           Hey...it worked!!!  Thank you
         for your help on the formatting
         and thank you for your wonderful
                    reply!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
13 posted 2000-08-14 01:54 PM


Sunny1,
  I can see I've been missing alot hiding in the PUB, These are delightful!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
14 posted 2000-08-14 03:57 PM


Hi Dennis....
    
           Glad you hopped on over!!
       There's a lot of great things
       happening here in #9..........
           Also, thank you for reading
                and your nice reply!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



vandana
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Posts 10463
USA
15 posted 2000-08-14 05:54 PM


All of my days,
I will forever follow,
Wherever you go,
    If I like Hakiu set#2,I will surely liked this one!!!!!!

ddgoose
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 250
Baltimore, MD, USA
16 posted 2000-08-14 06:18 PM


Sunny

Beautiful words filled with love from the heart.

didi

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
17 posted 2000-08-14 06:23 PM


Lovely!

Corinne

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
18 posted 2000-08-15 12:44 PM


vandana....
           Thank you, and I hope you did
                    enjoy both!!

didi....
           Thank you, also......
           my friends here inspire me!

Corinne....
             I am so glad you liked this!
             I appreciate your reply....


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



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