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Master
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0 posted 2000-08-13 07:17 PM


*I've just recently finished translating these from Russian to English... Tell me what you think...

The Sail

A lone white sail for an instant
Appears through haze of bluish foam,
What does it seek in lands so distant?
What did it leave behind at home?

The winds are raging and the mast
Bends, screeching in resentment
It seeks no happiness, -- alas--
Nor is it fleeting from contentment.

An azure stream runs by the sail...
A ray of light shines to appease,
And yet, this rebel seeks the gale--
As if in gales there is peace!


The Angel

An angel soared through the sky in the night
And softly he sang in his flight.
The moon and the stars and the clouds would throng
To hark to his numinous song

He sang of the bliss of immaculate ghosts
In the gardens of heaven reposed;
He sang of all-powerful God; his acclaim
Was truly sincere and unfeigned.

In his grasp, he carried an innocent soul
To the world of sorrow and gall;
The tune of his song with the babe would abide,
Missing the words- but alive.  

And for long, she would only pine on the earth
Overfilled with exceptional verve.
And the dull earthly songs could never transpose
The heavenly tunes that she lost.



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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-08-14 07:38 PM


They just prove the fact that poetry is poetry no matter what the language...somewhat like music.....Shakespeare's works alone have been translated into eighty different languages......ah the works of the arts are issued from the heart.....these works turned out very well I enjoyed reading them...
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