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guiliano
New Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 8
new york city

0 posted 2000-08-13 06:19 PM


Crazy on you*


my dear sweet girl bliss
catch my fevered eyes latch your stare
read my puckered lips ache your heated kiss
dance your princess toes into my naked river flow
arch your golden back over onto my waiting nest
I am going crazy on you* girl, no turning round
surging forward to your pillowed treasures
leaving behind sanity and its measure
dip your feet in my pool of mind
scratch your claws over my wishes blind
free my desire of the you crawling on top of me so fine
I am going crazy on you* girl,  
nothing will ever change my mind.  



"Takes it easy, baby
Take it as it comes
Don't move too fast
And you want your love to last
Oh, you've been movin' much too fast"=(The Doors)

© Copyright 2000 guiliano - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-08-14 07:44 PM


Hot stuff here! Whew! yes I read it twice and I am glad I found it to place a comment. Sometimes you have to be patient here at Passions because the place is full of excellent poets and you may get overlooked but not to despair...everyone will look forward to seeing your name in the writer's column in time...
ddgoose
Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250
Baltimore, MD, USA
2 posted 2000-08-14 07:51 PM


guiliano

Whew!!  I am hot too.  Lots of words meaning a whole lot.  Waiting to see more.

didi

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2000-08-14 09:56 PM


This makes me want to say!!!!!!!!!!!!!
COME ON BABY LIGHT MY FIRE>>>COME ON BABY TAKE ME HIGHER>>>>>YEH< YEH<  


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 08-14-2000).]

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