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Dedication.....to All Whisperers....... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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From Lips of The Whisperer to mine ears come his words so sure from his lips, he, the Whisperer, tender pensiveness of melody meant to be heard by only me O listen listen, my heart sings sonnets upon sonnets do ring free'd verse rhythmically sweeps me to passionate depths, I weep soft warm breath to lobe of mine intoxicatingly spoken, sublime when there is this, no need for wine enchanting me, does he, for all time… to mine ears come his words ever sure from his lips, he, the Whisperer… ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 13 August 2000 |
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BreyerRose Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 55Easton, Pa USA |
I can almost feel his breath upon my neck. This is wonderfully descriptive. I'm saving this one! Hugs and Kisses, Paula |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sunshine, such a sensual theme, so well expressed. Whispering is, indeed, an intimate affair...whispered poetry is ecstasy. (and sometimes, even when the Whisperer is unaware of the Whisperee)  ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Breyer Rose, welcome to Passions...thank you for reading...I'm so glad you could feel this one...but before you save this, read some of the other poets' works first...as there are far many more out there that surpass this... enjoy your stay... Claire...don't you suppose that most of the Whisperers and Whisperees are among the you's and me's? LOL! So enjoyed your comment... thanks... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
First off I now read aloud.....I have learned my lesson and yes I heard it this last time. Sometimes I think I must have been kicked in the head by my horse.LOL Now onto this one........Well it is sensual for sure...but in a way that is more like inviting peaceful intimacy...sort of like one of those quiet moments we treasure so much. The format I absolutely love as it seems to float in the wind to our ears. Loved it much as you already knew. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Mark, I know wherefrom you speak! [Another Forum!!! LOL!] As for this one, your comments please me much. Thank you my friend, for always looking over my shoulder... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Sunshine ... this has to become a favorite of mine! It has the earmarks of a classic ... so beautifully expressed, and the flow just sweeps beautifully from thought to beautiful thought! Incredible Sunshine! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Such lovely flow to your verse. A beauty for sure. You're in touch with a gentle and stirring muse. I like it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A lovely poem that pleases the ear and tickles the heart. jamie |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Karilea, this is just wonderful. . . so soft and delicate. . . I can almost hear it. . . softly. . . in the echoes of my mind. . . Sometimes, the whisperer is aware. . . thank you for showing us. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ahh, the sweet sensuousness of the whisperer, reality so far off. Corinne |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Sunshine I really enjoyed this one after having my ear whispered into ONLY seconds ago... it hit the spot..lol  If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOHHHHHHHH delicious shivers down the spine from whispered words so soft. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you everyone, for telling me that you enjoyed the pleasure of this...and Tori, I do believe I heard your smile... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
(and I thought it was the breeze...)  ah, Karilea, what a beauty this one is... WOW regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, you are ever so kind, thank you... |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Very nice. One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, Angel Girl. Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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