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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
... HeartSense ... The sapphire sky begins its rest As mist of rain caresses her breasts Remembering times of yesterdays When she was loved by him every day. The sounds that echo thru mind Are those of swooshing wheels outside The feelings that stream thru heart Are those of love that grew apart The sights that seen thru eyes of green Are those of what could have been The amber sun begins its slow rise As crisp the air a new day resides She opens door and to her surprise Discovering a new world outside. The sounds that echo thru mind Are those of crickets and morn sparrows in flight The feelings that stream thru heart Are those of love who know her well The sights that seen thru eyes of green Are those of what her life can now be. * Coco * Footnote: Days are bright Nights are calm with compassion N love one is never a lone dove. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
bravo...i like this very much.... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CocoBaci~ This is such a pretty opening line - 'The sapphire sky begins its rest' I enjoyed this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
She opens door and to her surprise Discovering a new world outside. Venture out and enjoy every essence that life has to offer. Your creation is so beautiful and it leaves me feeling warm and much loved....thank you dearly. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Coco...very nicely written...I especially liked...She opens door and to her surprise discovering a new world outside...a little hope there. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome to your new world my friend. . . come out and take a look around. . . Just wonderful Coco. . . you had me from the opening. . . "The sapphire sky begins its rest. . . " Excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Coco, you know this has been the first poem I have read of yours in a long while. I missed you and your poetry. This was beautiful, sensual and graceful. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Stilled my soul, you did...this is beauty, Coco...I thank you much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Coco... this is STUNNING... just so very lovely..I was so pleased to find a post from you... and what a beauty it is... I adding this gem to my library file suberb poetry my friend... I love the imagery and colors... that first verse just hooks the reader .. take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I find a peace when I come on line and read such beauty and love of life. The screen tv is my safe place where I may partake in sharing with you expression and thought. More importantly receiving the gift of many a pleasant night read you poet friends give to me.  I'd say thank you in ten languages if I knew but for now accept my gracious Merci n Grazi if you would Hugz Coco |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"She opens door and to her surprise a brand new world is found outside." This is the way I felt when I let go of a hopeless love and decided to go on with my life...It is always there if we allow our eyes to see it and our heart to feel it..James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi CocoBaci, I believe this is my first time by your place, and I am glad that I stopped by. I did like and enjoy your writing. |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Coco Beautiful poem - words flowing from one thought to another. I liked it very much! didi |
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