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What am I to do?
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What am I to do? |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
I wrote this poem as an initial reaction to an event and it is purely from a heart which is hurt and confused. For a couple of days me and my boyfriend have not seen eachother...and well, you may read on... What am I to do? on the world wide net, I am left alone sleep deprived am I with my love at his home many miles away my cries turn into moans a feeling of emptiness...a feeling of alone but of the the little time we have, now has gotten small I wish upon a star for nothing but a call it is a fact that the mind comprehends explain it to the heart which yearns and begs a little more time, for just one night an exclusion for us, no friends for tonight a paradise sweet for both you and I but as many nights pass, sleep as I cry "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
"explain it to the heart which yearns and begs"...how this hurts |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Thank you paula for your support  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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BreyerRose Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 55Easton, Pa USA |
Did I read somewhere that this is your first poem? No way! It was great. By the way, I love your signature. How true those words are. Hugs and Kisses, Paula |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I wish you my best. Michael |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
J~ I can only share your pain, this pain I know so well... I know of no words to help, only to console...your well expressed feelings..Steve B. |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
to BreyerRose... thank you for your words and you know I was thinking that it[my quote] was a bit tacky..but I said to myself that I would prefer to have my own saying..even though it probably isn't the greatest lol ..thank you once again to auguste... thank you for your wish, I appreciate that very much to steve B... thank you for your kind words I appreciate them very much "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You've really captured the mood of a lover yearning for the one they love.....very well done..I could could feel it....WELCOME! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
JNR4, you've expressed the feeling of loneliness very well and I hope that your lover wakes-up and gives you a call or something. Good piece and thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
to ethome.... thank you for your kind words they mean alot to me to nate dogg.. I couldnt help but laugh when u said that this person better call ...LOL i'm still laughing now..thank you for your kind words you have made me laugh  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Such emotions here JnR4! I'm so sorry to hear of this pain you must endure! I only wish there was some way to console your hurt...all I can say is I'm here if u ever need... You were right! there are some parallels here. ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a HuG grows with a kIsS and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of all the times I was patiently and hopefully waiting for a certain call... and wondering why I just couldn't bring myself to be the one that called first. Fearing that she would say I was bothering her and yet if she called everything would be alright..feelings of insecurity...perhaps she doesn't care for me after all...but if she would just call maybe she does care...James |
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