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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2000-08-12 11:43 PM


these days i feel like walking off...

~short walk~

i took a short walk
on the pier tonight
i could have gone farther
but i would have died
i couldn't see the bottom
of the water, it was dark
but as i stood there looking down
the water made a mark
my mind has kept this for hours now
and it wont go away
i'll go back there tommorrow
and see if the mark has stayed
i think i may be crazy
to have thought i'd seen this sign
it looked like an agate stone
maybe it was mine.
a watery grave just for me
maybe i'll take a closer look
tommorrow we will see.

Nikolette Sadness


i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

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Nikolette Sadness
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1 posted 2000-08-13 12:36 PM


had to put in it my library

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Paula Finn
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2 posted 2000-08-13 12:41 PM


some days are just like that sweetie...short walks to nowhere
Nikolette Sadness
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3 posted 2000-08-13 02:14 AM


paula...thanx for th reply...seems like all my days are like that...
Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Effigy
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4 posted 2000-08-13 02:16 AM


wonderful. nicely done.
Nikolette Sadness
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5 posted 2000-08-13 02:53 AM


thanx...effigy...

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2000-08-13 03:07 AM


I will take that walk with you, but I'm warning you, I'm bringing a rod and reel, and two ice-chests...one for beer and one for the fish we catch...love and hugs to you, Nik...schedule time for fun.
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7 posted 2000-08-13 05:00 AM


you bring the beer i have my own private mooshine...*yeehaw*

i'm such a redneck!

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Nikolette Sadness
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8 posted 2000-08-14 04:34 PM


just wanted jesse to read it...<3



Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Jesse Jaymz
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9 posted 2000-08-14 04:47 PM


nik
*hugs and kisses*  what a very sweet poem.  i have done this many times before.  but i will save you from your watery grave.  just jump into my arms and you will always be safe  =)  *hugS*  great work hun
love ya
jesse


Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

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