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redheart angrybraids
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0 posted 2000-08-12 08:29 PM


Creation circled these
perfectly drawn stars,
from dusty
chases grace.
Unfolded elements
danced
on solar stages.
Weaving
gathered gaurdians
embrace.
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Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


[This message has been edited by redheart angrybraids (edited 08-12-2000).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-08-12 08:38 PM


big sigh...redheart, this is simply luscious--would love to spend an afternoon with watching clouds form pictures in the sky...you've my admiration, m'friend.
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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2 posted 2000-08-12 08:59 PM


This is lovely.  The title drew me in, and the meticulously penned words fed me like a hungry baby bird.
By the way, I find your name, and picture to be very intriguing.  You sound angry, but are laughing.  Combination makes you someone impossible to forget!

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-08-12 09:04 PM


LittleLovingRedHeartAngryBraids~

What charm you share through your thoughts.
I love the feeling I get when reading you.
Thank you for the gifting of your phrases.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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redheart angrybraids
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4 posted 2000-08-16 05:21 PM


thank you all kindly as usual,


Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

redheart angrybraids
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5 posted 2000-08-16 05:21 PM


thank you all kindly as usual,


Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

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