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Morning Bath Time (Haiku)
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Morning Bath Time (Haiku) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Morning Bath Time Bathed by morning dew Soaked in glistening bubbles The wild green blades play Angel of Darkness [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 08-12-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a splendid Haiku  |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
What a nice, fun thought  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Wonderful Maree,, and at days end? Baked all day by Sol slightly dusty from our play time to bathe again Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Damp of morning dew Lays gently on the flowers Toweled off by sun ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
always like what i read, refreshing and lovely Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lovely thoughts and a great Haiku. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful!! I love it Maree.  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Maree, this is excellent. . . I've always loved how the grass looks in the morning. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What a refreshing bath Loved it Liz |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
"Wild green blades" .....rotflmao ..LOL ... ....sorreee it's just that i got this instant vision of Darth Vader et al and their wild green blades ....yeah yeah ..i know, i'm silly ..... ok calmed down now....... seriously Maree you are very clever at these things ... P |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Maree! Denise |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The image gave me a real refreshing lift as I thought of the tremendous amount of life that exists in those growing green blades. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
so serene blades of green yuh! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW, what a wonderful response, Thank you all so very much I appreciate it ! Oh and Jamie and Margey, thank you for your lovely Haiku replies they are so beautiful Maree |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
A completely goregous thought here, Maree...you definitely have a talent for Haikus! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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