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No...I Don't Simply Love You
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No...I Don't Simply Love You |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
No...I Don't Simply Love You I Love you... at this moment those are the easiest words for me to say. Three words to describe my feelings perfectly as they give my heart away. Hope you know I can't stop the flow when these desires and feelings well up in my heart. I have tried my best to give these feelings a rest than I walk in the door and adore you once more. I try so hard to hesitate yet those words soon flow from my lips the same as before. Just last night I tried with all my might to convince you you're the woman I Love and adore. I loved your reply. You told me to look into your eyes and to tell you exactly what I see. To tell you honestly from my heart I could see me loving you but I still want to see you loving me. Still I appreciate the words that flowed from your heart just before we parted that night. At first I thought you said it was too soon for our love to grow. Yet when I ask you to say it again you told me the words you spoke were "soon our hearts would know." I Love you! No...I don't simply Love you!! I really Love you with all my heart and soul!!! Jameslee@August12,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 08-12-2000).] |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
and it darn sure shows James! Tony  |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
YOU TELL HER!!!!!!! So true here, you can never just "simply" love.....it is so much more. Jenn E |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
And make sure she never forgets that |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
James, sometimes, you just have to give it all and lay it all out on the line. . . you have done that with this poem. . . Excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James, that is so good. What a brilliant shining example, you are to all those who don't let it show. Thank you for the pleasure of your poem. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi jmlee12345, Tell her james, tell her good, as you have in this writing. You always manage to tell a story about yourself, and very well, I might add. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Tony, Jenn, Hoot Owl, Sven, Marsha, and Bill for the wonderful comments. I appreciate them very much. I have rairly done this...but the second time I was with Lena I could not help myself...I told her I Loved her...softly and sincerely...it was the way she looked into my eyes...those lovely eyes. I am hoping for a serious relationship with her. I have at least three women that I adore right now...all only friendships...so much beauty, personality, and sensuality all around me and she always remains number one in my heart and thoughts. I have told her not to make me wait too long..Her message to me is "soon". James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
SOON is as bad a word as SOMEDAY lol...but its better not to rush |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula I realize one persons soon could mean five minutes and anothers could mean years...she told me it would be this year...and she told me soon.. perhaps she is lying... still I would never demand anything from her. If she cares for me she will find the desire to come to me...if not I must accept the desires of her heart...Love is precious...we must not demand or rush Love. I still have hope...I have told her not to make me wait too long...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
A very lucky lady she is and beautifully written. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Victoria I wish she would make me a very lucky man...James |
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