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Chasms Of Tomorrow |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Chasms Of Tomorrow ~*Marge Tindal*~ Chasms of tomorrow Open up and swallow me Floating amidst cascading thoughts Cadenced crunch of cacophonous sound Spinning me 'round Pulling me down into the vortex of soul's seeking Spiraling me into the light of eternity's grace Serenity cloaked in ivory lace lays just to the right of the lamb of fleece Surrender me now to peace Surrender me now to peace Yea, though I walk toward the promise of tomorrow seeking the lamb of peace with no sorrow Let me remember that peace can be found in the joy of today until I'm valley bound ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
such a sweetly woven prayer of peace...I love this Marge |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Marge, You've really outdone yourself this one. "Serenity cloaked in ivory lace" I loved that line. What a beautiful image comes to mind. Michael |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Only Marge could take a walk into the valley of death and find the upward road! Inspirational, you are, Marge! I know, I know, I'm repeating myself, but it bears repeating. Coirnne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Thanks for perceiving that it came as a prayer of peace. Auguste~ Sometimes the words just wrap themselves in the prettiest fabric and it clings to them. Thank you for the kind words. Corinne~ It was a walk of splendor for sure. And 'inspirational' is okay by me !  Thanks, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Serenity cloaked in ivory lace lays just to the right of the lamb of fleece Ohhh Marge....I just loved this creation of yours to pieces....my favorite lines are above. These are lines of poetic fame to be cherished forever. You are truely....weeeeellllll...let's just say "Margical" for all the magic you bring us everyday. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I loved the serenity in this piece, calming on a not so calm day  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Your thoughts mean a lot to me. I appreciate you. Hoot~ I trust you'll find calm in the hours of the night. Thank you for the reply, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
seeking the lamb of peace with no sorrow Marge, It's heavenly words, and thats my prayer to the end. Deb |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Another unique creation, Miss Marge...very nice! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Glad you enjoyed it. Claire~ Your thoughts are always appreciated. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Spiraling me into the light of eternity's grace Serenity cloaked in ivory lace lays just to the right of the lamb of fleece Surrender me now to peace .... WOW Marge, such an eloquently written poem... To read this is a treat... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ How much I thank you, my friend. So very, very pleased to know that you enjoyed the serenity within it. I send warm thoughts your way. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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