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Mike
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since 1999-06-19
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0 posted 2000-08-12 02:23 PM


Fair Rose, how would I kiss thee dear?
I would kiss thee lightly on thy brow,
As whisper softly in thine ear,
Sweet words of love to thee avow.
A rising warmth as lips in yearning meld,
Tender touch of satin rose in warm embrace,
Within mine arms, thy gracious charms in passion held,
Thou art the light of heaven's grace,
Sweet taste of honeyed mead, desire's delight,
Dear Cecilia, music springs from forth thy breast,
Doth soothe my pain in glow of Luna's light,
As sate my inner fire, love's desire, mine lover's quest.
Fair Rose, to thee I make this mortal vow,
How would I kiss thee goddess fair?  With love and tenderness is how.



[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 08-12-2000).]

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2000-08-12 03:13 PM


What heavenly kiss, would I have missed,
So tender and devine, a longing, a stir,
Within  this heart of mine,

Tender on my brow,Softly, gently,
Warm and sweet, I feel the tingle from thy  head to thy feet,

My wish is to have this kiss, to have it now, pressing against the screen, my puckered lips feeling it touch me somehow,

***wow*** Your kiss poem inspires me!! LOVED IT as always! Now If I could find that someone to give me one like this...oh, to dream of this kiss!

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2000-08-12 03:31 PM


Mike~
All of your 'roses' fall so softly to the page -

'Tender touch of satin rose in warm embrace'

A lovely thought ... just lovely !
~*Marge*~


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BreyerRose
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since 2000-08-12
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3 posted 2000-08-12 04:15 PM


My heart melted as I continued to read each line. It took my breath away.
hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-08-12 06:44 PM


As soft and tender as the petals of the flower of which you speak....lovely verse my friend  
BloomingRose
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5 posted 2000-08-12 07:16 PM


Mike
Simply beautiful...*sigh*

Martie
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6 posted 2000-08-12 09:04 PM


Mike--you write a sigh into your love and tenderness...mine.
Irish Rose
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7 posted 2000-08-12 10:24 PM


Kiss me, Kiss me!!!!



Kathleen



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