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If I Could
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If I Could |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
It wasn't easy for me To tell you How much I love you, If I could tell you How much I love you, You would only see a love Inside my heart Is true, You would understand that, I am not lyning And I am telling you From the bottom of my heart, If you could only see How true I was And never will break your heart, If I could only ask you To touch me And love me for thje last time, Forget the past, Come to me, And love me like never before, If you would only see Through my heart, You would only see How true I was, I promise, I won't leave you Cause I will love you, If I could tell you Iam sorry, If I hurt you, I will make It up to you And make you alright, I will hold you tight, When the stars shines so bright for us, If I could onlt tell you How I much I really love you, If I could only.... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderful poem Vandana. One of your best. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
vandana, if they would only listen my friend. . . if only. . . then they would know what a truly wonderful person you really are. . . this is indeed the best poem you've written, very well done. . . full of emotion. . . excellent my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, you're really committed and this great poem shows it. The emotion in it was awesome  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I haven't read you for a while and lucky for me tonite I found this one you write. Hugz to you this poem is one of your best Ciao =) Coco =) |
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