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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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she saw herself in her dreams no longer a dried dead rose withering away but a new rose in full bloom rich in color, weak yet strong her petals reach for the sun and smile at each new day another chance to dance with the humming bird she tempts him with her beauty he smiles at the rose admiring her pose waiting to drink in the sweetness of her she completes her purpose just to be the beautiful rose She turns softly in her sleep waiting for the next page to turn as she dreams of more roses to bloom BloomingRose |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
BR - I've yet to read something of yours - that hasn't prompted me to reply with the nicest things I can say. This is obviously no exception. Great use of anthropomorphism (sp?) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Wilfred Thanks, glad you like it. I am really curious what that word is you typed. I am not familar with that word but I sure would like to know what it means.  Deb BloomingRose |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderfully written. Enjoyed your poetry. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
this is the first(but not the last) of yours I have read. The imagery is spectacular and I especially like...another chance to dance with the hummingbird |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Debra...what can I say my dear new friend. This is beautiful and I am very touched by your words. Pages are turning and once more we shall both bloom again. Hugs Ruth What lies behind us and lies before us are small matters compaired to what lies within us. ~Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Yes .... very vividly portrayed in dreamlike fashion. 'anthropomorphism \An`thro*po*mor"phism\, n. [Gr. ? of human form; ? man + ? form.] 1. The representation of the Deity, or of a polytheistic deity, under a human form, or with human attributes and affections.' *Good show, Wilfred ! *Good poem, BloomingRose !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Mike, Thanks Paula, Glad you enjoyed it. I love to watch the humming birds dance before a flower. Ruth, Yes, many more roses to bloom and pages to turn. Hugs Marge, Thank you, I am happy you liked it. I couldn't resist I had to look the word up in the dictionary. anthropomorphize to attribute human form or personality to things not human I have never heard this word before Learn something new everyday |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Long may the roses bloom!!! This one goes in my library, this is fabulous. It gives me strength, let the summer roses die, we are alive in the forum. forgive me, I'm in a good mood tonight!!! Kathleen |
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