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Open Poetry #9

Perplexion of the heart

JnR4eva
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 377
Bronx, NY

0 posted 2000-08-12 03:22 AM

shall I sing a song to soothe thy soul?
perhaps write a rhyme to ease thy mind?
give thee gifts of grandeur with so much more
or kisses acute on thy cheek until sore?
whilst I whimsically wallow in my mind above
simply to tell thee how much I love

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

1 posted 2000-08-12 03:42 AM

This was short and so very sweet. So much said in this wonderfully written little verse.Ahhhhhh, so many ways to say I love you. Great style here.

Jenn E

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

2 posted 2000-08-12 03:51 AM

very sweet...I like this muchly

JnR4eva
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 377
Bronx, NY

3 posted 2000-08-12 02:28 PM

to Jenn E and Paula Finn -
I thank you both very much for your very kind words. I appreciate it a lot

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