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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2000-08-12 02:15 AM


its funny how no one misses you until they think your dead...

~Cryptic Ambiance~

light penetrating thorugh a sheet of darkness
cryptic ambiance
velvet soft to touch
wanting you so much
cryptic ambiance
thunder rumbles in my ears
your leaving brought these tears
cryptic ambiance
i miss you with all of me
i cry for you on my knees
cryptic ambiance
my blood has long been shed
why am i not dead
cryptic ambiance
i think i love you
or do i not
i have fallen
i wont be caught
cryptic ambiance
they are coming for me now
shadows take a bow
life has left this place
yet heart still beats
why is this
death knows defeat

Nikolette Sadness


i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

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Paula Finn
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1 posted 2000-08-12 03:07 AM


Girl this is so dark and brooding intense...I can feel it deep in my soul
Nikolette Sadness
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2 posted 2000-08-12 03:54 AM


thanx alley...i'm hyper  

Nik







i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

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