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Evening Serenade. . .
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Evening Serenade. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Close your eyes gentle love Escape from the cares of day Let the song of evening's last dove Serenade you along the dreamer's way Open your mind tender heart As your melody floats along Let the words of gentle power start Carrying you away on wings of song Rest your body sweet sprit Take my hand and hold tight Let the sound of our heart's dearest Be the only music this night ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
the beauty of this just takes my breathe away |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Close your eyes gentle love Open your mind tender heart Rest your body ...so tender, Sven was lovely ~~softly Maureen |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A beautiful final read of my night Sven...This serenade shall sing me to sleep tonight...Thank you for sharing it~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Sven, I was hoping to read something of you before I end my day. Tis a lovely serenade you've shared with the 'gurlz' =) Coco =) |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Would that even one evening might reflect this treasure, my friend. A tender shelter in which to dream... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
~sigh~ This is melting Sven  loved it |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Beautiful Sven...! So simple and yet, beautiful. It even feels so relaxing. *sigh* Nice job! ~Artistic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hum a few bars....lol... Totally lovely, Sveetie...a string of pearls... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, this does one in.... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Getting better all the time Your romantic poetry is at its best Liz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Paula, thank you so much. . . Maureen, *softly*. . . thank you. . . Butterflies, I hope that you had wonderful dreams. . . and you're welcome. . . Coco, I am glad that I didn't disappoint. . . and as always, it's my pleasure to share with all of you. . . Claire, there have been evenings like this. . . you only have to see them. . . rest well my friend. . . Dark Angel. . . melting?? Thank you my friend. . .  Artistic, thank you. . . just something short and simple. . . serenity, I'm afraid that I don't know "A Few Bars" lol  but I do know "String of Pearls". . . Karilea, "does one in"? Wow. . . hope that I didn't do you in too much. . .  thank you my friend. . . Elizabeth. . . thank you. . . I'm trying. . . it's been getting better, thank you for your encouragement. . . and thanks for noticing. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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