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Vaporous One Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 35 |
golden webs spun of lace intricately woven each thread in place fragile balance trust sewn together amazingly strong withstands any weather delicate union hung by mere threads... filaments of friendship most precious of webs |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful! I love it!  Denise |
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Vaporous One Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 35 |
Thank you! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
The delicate theme of this piece is made evident by your perfect choice of words. How lovely, to describe the trust of friendship this way. Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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BamaPoet Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34Dothan, AL USA |
Nice work! I agree, you choice of words is beautiful. Anyone would be happy to be friends with someone with your talent. |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
So completely true and so completely well said!! -jaimie http://www.ladysixstring.com |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VO~ Absolutely a lovely piece. I like the threads of friendship you've taken the time to weave. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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