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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Kindred Spirit Kindred Soul What thought crosses your mind? As a smile plays across your features? A sweet memory perhaps? Of a good time long past? Tell us, good friend A face As old as time Yet, still young Criss-crossed with laughing wrinkles Time has passed you by Leaving its mark upon you And you still smile By and by ________________ ~Artistic~ This is by far, one of my favorite poems I have ever written and possibly one of my personal best also. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful, Artistic!  Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I can see why this is one of your favorites. I love the idea you've imparted that the kindred of souls know no time or age confinement. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Thank you Denise and Claire... glad you enjoyed my poem! ~Artistic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Artistic-Double up on that comment of Claire's...she said it exactly and you should like this one and be proud of it to no end. Lovely read and it goes in my personal file. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent. . . Kindred Spirits are wonderful to have. . . I should know. . . Wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Mark- I'm honored you'd keep my poem in your personal file... especially since I'm so new to passions! Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem... Sven- So glad you enjoyed the poem and it was quite enjoyable chatting with you! ~Artistic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Artistic, Wonderful writing here. We all need to have a kindred spirit to help us along the way in life. Welcome to Passions....hope to see more of your writing soon. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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