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Mel2Lizz
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since 2000-08-08
Posts 20
Alamosa, Colorado

0 posted 2000-08-11 05:50 PM


I thought that you were such a jerk when I first met you; and I felt sorry for the one who called you her boyfriend.

Time past and I got to know you, that is when I realized that you weren't such a jerk, and I was then jealous of the one who called you boyfrined.

The more time that past the more I came to know you and soon I fell in love with you and soon came to realize that I was the one that was a jerk.

Time has now pasted into years and I have to tell you so sorry for thinking that you were such a jerk. I now long to be with you and wish that for one short moment, that you were my "jerk".

I thought you were such a jerk when I met you, now I wish that I could have you and the "jerk" I met so many years ago..and I was the one that you could call girlfriend.


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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville
1 posted 2000-08-11 06:11 PM


very good, I like your meanings and the way you turn them around
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