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OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

0 posted 2000-08-11 03:37 PM


Changing The Watch (Haiku)

Brass reflecting oak,
Hemp knotted clapper silent,
Waiting eight bells toll.

Olias


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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-08-11 03:42 PM


where have you been poet
we have missed your graceful words
glad to see you back  


very cool Haiku Olias...
crytic and mystical images
take care
jm

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-08-11 03:49 PM


Yes, where have you been.  Exploring the world of wonders it seems.

Wonderful Haiku you have brought back from your journey.

Lakewalker
Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-08-11 04:52 PM


Very nice haiku
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