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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-11 01:01 PM

to grace your heart
is what I would do
for my mistakes
that I have lived through
for being stuborn
and all so afraid
of what loving you
could mean to me this day.
of holding on
to what we could mean
of a house and children
those that we see
of stupid ideals
that I thought we should have
those that tear us
and could not take back.
it is this I say
to your heart now hurt
from my mistakes
that I seem to never learn
that I am me
though not complete
without your love
it is hard for me to see.
so I will do I must
to get back to you
and gain your trust
I shall sleep on floors
that are paved in pain
and do all those small things
to begin your love to gain.
and though you hate
and so you should
I shall endvour to work
at all of these things
and if one day
you should finnally kiss
me heart will burst
for I know this
that we are one
and that is the truth.
the heavens sent you
for my sins I have done
and those that cause you pain
for I am now in hell
and all I can say
is that I love you
and will do what it takes
to keep us as one.

[This message has been edited by Michael G (edited 08-11-2000).]

cathybohannan
Member

since 2000-07-31

Posts 140
Paintsville,KY

1 posted 2000-08-11 01:41 PM

lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2000-08-11 01:49 PM

Hi Michael...
             Yes, this is another piece of
            your writing that I enjoyed very
            much........
                Thank you for all that
                       you share...

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-08-11 03:18 PM

it is this I say
to your heart now hurt
from my mistakes
that I seem to never learn
that I am me
though not complete
without your love
it is hard for me to see.
so I will do I must
to get back to you
and gain your trust
I shall sleep on floors
that are paved in pain
and do all those small things
to begin your love to gain.
and though you hate
and so you should
I shall endvour to work
at all of these things
and if one day
you should finnally kiss
me heart will burst
for I know this
that we are one
and that is the truth.
the heavens sent you
for my sins I have done
and those that cause you pain
for I am now in hell
and all I can say
is that I love you
and will do what it takes
to keep us as one.
=====================
oh Michael....
this one just ripps at my heart...
i feel every line..which is the gift of your poetry.
and I know it hurts...but purging the pain
thru your writing does help heal our hearts.
take care of you for me..OK

me

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