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Over the Rain |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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They gave him a button a magic flying button he was a pilot in his youth skipping church to tip his wings at pretty young things in his open cock pit bi plane my dad the ace with a magic button to fly to kill his pain that was killing him and if he could fly then why oh why can't I? Hate is a dead thing. Who of you would be a tomb? -Kahlil Gibran |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Why indeed...I think you do!!! |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i especially enjoyed the first two verses, kindly writen, Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I'm not as think as you drunk I am |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
great lines here, hawke- "skipping church to tip his wings at pretty young things in his open cock pit bi plane" wonderful imagery! i can almost see it... a really fine tribute. had to read it a few times to get the full picture because i've had tee many martoonis, take me drunk, i'm home.  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I'd rather have a bottle in front of me than a frontal lobotomy........ Spank you Doreen.. Spank you very much...  |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is great......guess my prompting helped us both.....you are a really wonderful poet my friend.....and I love this  |
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