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ma miller
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806


0 posted 2000-08-11 11:19 AM


arrows ...

the slivers
of her breath
incise the air
cutting
their path
directly
for my
heart

the storm
of her kiss
deluge the streams
flooding
their banks
directly
for my
desire

the aurora
of her love
surrounds the sun
magnifying
its rays
directly
for my
soul

and
i am hers


M.A. Miller
08.11.00


My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.



© Copyright 2000 ma miller - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-08-11 11:36 AM


MA Miller...

         I was taken by the very last line!
         This is so perfect,
              clean and straight as an
                      arrow!!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



redheart angrybraids
Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii
2 posted 2000-08-11 12:08 PM


absolutely lovely Miller.


Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

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