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Sent on the wind
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Sent on the wind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Sent upon the wind Twilight layers the azure lie Euphoria spreads the sky. Whispering censure in the breeze Talking to the brooding trees. Standing o'er the forest green Shaking leaves at things unseen Filtering light in wild coquette. Kismet of illusions net. Read the sounds upon the vale Listen close to breaths inhale The symbols hieroglyphic swell The weeping deep within the shell. Twilight plays a subtle mean It speaks of things that are for glean. My heart is full of verse and sign I can but treasure it as mine. Rest well within the gardens scene Forever, rules my mystery queen. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sy - of all the poems I read in the forums, yours are the ones that tease me best with every line - so unpredictable, and yet so right. I really enjoy your play with words that are not predictable. This is another "Sy" poem - so well written, so smoothe. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is another of your exquisite works my friend, Seymour... regards, sudhir |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Seymour... Thank you for writing this... I love poetry that's interlaced with nature. This was exceptional and shows your observant nature! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Seymour nicely done ... ditto Sunny1 on the interlacing nature ... beautiful |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Exceptional, Seymour. A beautiful read. Michael |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LngJhnAg, You could not have made a nicer comment. Sudhir, Thank you many times. Sunny1, Wonderful observation. *L* MA Miller, Ditto on Sunny1 answer. Michael, Thanks for the exceptional. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ How very, very longinly lovely are your thoughts ... 'Twilight plays a subtle mean It speaks of things that are for glean. My heart is full of verse and sign I can but treasure it as mine.' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lngjhn said it best and this is "classic Sy". A touch of euphoria, listening to the winds. A superb poem Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Your just something else. *L* Elizabeth, And you are just something. Love Sy |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The wind has a language of its own, doesn't it?...Enjoyed as usual, my friend..  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Seymour, your wordings tempt my senses and make me think. "Standing o'er the forest green Shaking leaves at things unseen Filtering light in wild coquette. Kismet of illusions net" (Stll trying to figger out that "wild coquette")  Enjoyed this lots ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, And so do you. *L* Claire, Filtering light in wild coquette "temptation." Does that help? *L* |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I love walking in your world...catch the wind...ride it high...wow |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful work Seymour just wonderful! Professionally done. |
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