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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 08-11-2000 05:06 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elizabeth Santos


Come to me

Come to me when autumn chills
Blow oíer the stark and jagged hills
When wayward pathís obscurity
Becomes too dark, please come to me

When ocean storm and perilous wave
Destroy your dreams and all you gave
Whenever you are lost at sea
Turn Ďround the keel and come to me

Please come to me when winter frost
Makes icy ghosts of dreams you lost
When glimmering white shines endlessly
Upon your sorrow, come to me

If ever your heart is void of love
And peace is all your dreaming of
Then tread a path thatís homeward bound
And I will turn your life around

When moon glows on the oceanís crest
And you are weary of unrest
Then follow the stars, and I will be
Waiting for you to come to me

If you get caught in lifeís cruel ways
And canít escape the tangled maze
If you believe our love is true
Just call my name, Iíll come to you

Elizabeth Santos
© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 08-11-2000 06:28 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Walking towards Liz... one step at a time...  

Liz,
This is beautiful errr.. and all the rest of the below too


brilliant, shining; beamy, beaming; sparkling, splendid, resplendent, dazzling, glowing; glossy, sleek.

rich, superb, magnificent, grand, fine, sublime, showy, specious.

artistic, artistical; aesthetic; picturesque, pictorial; fait a peindre; well-composed, well grouped, well varied; curious.

(thanks to a thesaurus....   I finally found some words)

regards,
sudhir

Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 08-11-2000 07:30 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sudhir,

Do I hear you calling my name?
You've got me laughing and it's not even 8AM yet. Good work, Sudhir. Now I need a dictionary to find out what "fait a peindre" means.
But I'll take it as a compliment
This is the best review I've ever had
Thank you, my friend
Liz
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 08-11-2000 07:37 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Elizabeth~
Well, I like it too !
Will you settle for a paltry beautiful ?

LOL @ the ever-effusing Sudhir !

What a delightful day this is !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kit McCallum
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4 posted 08-11-2000 07:51 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Oh Liz ... I'm so glad I got a few moments to read in Open this morning ... between you and Bonnie, I'm feeling much more peaceful to begin the day. This was perfectly beautiful ... I echo all of Sudhir's incredible comments!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 08-11-2000 07:53 AM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

Ah, Liz: I'm lost in this romantic dream of a poem. Sigh.. How beautifully you make your words flow into a heavenly tapestry of bliss!
Love, ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 08-11-2000 08:39 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

He'd come to you if he could
There is no doubt I'm sure he would.
You've touched him with this epopee
In conscious dream and revelry.
Love Sy
Martie
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7 posted 08-11-2000 08:51 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Hi Liz--Gotta say Sudhir stole all my words...except for Hugs!
Denise
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8 posted 08-11-2000 09:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Breathtakingly beautiful, Elizabeth! Absolutely beautiful!

Denise
Meadowmuse
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9 posted 08-11-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Liz, I can hear this being sung, almost. What a gifting you have shared with us...just gorgeous.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

CocoBaci
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10 posted 08-12-2000 03:25 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Elizbeth, when I read each poem you pen, I sit back and sigh at the beauty of expression you continue to share.

=) Coco =)
Paula Finn
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11 posted 08-12-2000 03:34 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

Elizabeth...you say the words my heart no longer can...thank you
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 08-12-2000 05:37 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Marge, I'd settle for "Hi!". But
Sudhir does have a few words up his sleeve.doesn't he? Or else a thesaurus. But I doubt if he ever needs a thesaurus. Thanks, Marge, for the beautiful

Kit, Thank you, dear. I'm glad you liked it

Ellie, Your comments are most eloquent

Sy, I'm glad you were touched

Martie, No words are needed. But thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it

Denise. Thanks and hope to see you soon,

Claire, Thank you for your sweet comments

Coco, I really appreciate your remarks

Paula, You make me smile. Thank you

Liz
ethome
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13 posted 08-12-2000 06:44 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Aw Elizabeth you continue to stun me with your wonderful poetic arrangements... this is no exception... what a brilliant well crafted word display of the strength of love, with a whole lot of heart thrown right in the middle for a catalyst....great!!!
tracie66
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14 posted 08-12-2000 07:18 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Liz this is extremely beautiful my friend   a tender calling...lovingly written  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

JamesMichael
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15 posted 08-12-2000 07:39 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very warm and sincere thoughts...we can only hope that someone will be there for us....James
Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 08-12-2000 09:46 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

ethome, Your enthusiasm continues to make me smile. You give encouragement to so many of us
Thank you

Tracee, Thanks so much for your remarks

james, I appreciate your reading and commenting on my pems. Thank you
skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars


17 posted 06-02-2006 01:07 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

This is a beautiful call of love....

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

LadySofia
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18 posted 06-06-2006 06:48 AM       View Profile for LadySofia   Email LadySofia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit LadySofia's Home Page   View IP for LadySofia

Liz, you are definitely on the ball with this one, as always. I enjoyed reading this, it truly hit home. Your poesy strikes me with good flow, rhyming lines, and excellent imagery that makes me want to cry because I feel the movement in this one much more so than usual. Thanks for sharing!
 
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