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In the Mists of Time...Sonnet
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In the Mists of Time...Sonnet |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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(Heroic Couplets)from a sonnet redoubled In the mists of time, once kissed a heart soft and light Led into a world, sensation filled, of pure delight From lips, so sweetened, of you, one could never tire Feasting only with passion's taste, and morning dew's desire A pleading look from bluest eyes of piercing needs Blending bodies, touching, taunting, teasingly feeds Emotions rising, yielding, calling, escaping in sighs Together reaping rewards of loving, pooling in eyes Tears of happy, of time spent with no tomorrows Loving today, savouring that which is, having no sorrow Sharing your heart each night and your words by day Sustained the loving forever in memories this way Each time the sun, the moon, the stars lit up the sky We shared wine and bread together, you and I Maureen *2k [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-11-2000).] |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
"...of time spent with no tomorrows" i love this line... beautiful words, Maureen. You really are going for 1000 tonight, huh? good luck  Tony |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
Enchanting! Beautiful sonnet |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
not really T... I already fell asleep twice here tonight ..I am exhausted but am afraid to go upstairs to bed..as there are two bats visitng me..the kind that fly so I brought my quilt and pillow here and have every light on to keep them away from me and was figuring I may as well stay up read and respond...someone messaged me and startled me awake again..but I don't think I will reach 1000 ~~soft thought Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Daniel_vv thank you for reading and your sweet comments ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nicely written Maureen... so Batman is bothering you, eh?? two of them ohhhhh must be real troublesome then then...  regards, sudhir |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
It's a love feast! This was written beautifully! ~sighs~ Really enjoyed this one  <*\\\>< The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Very captivating........ a very loving sensual and tender piece here. This I really enjoyed. Jenn E |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Beautiful writing MMoonchild! Corinne |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Thank you Mmoonchild, that is so enchantingly lovely, and so beautiful. I love it, of course I do, but it is so well phrased, and so perfect.  So the thanks are for the soothing phrases and gentle tone. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sudhir I would take batman or men over the bats any day thank you for the chuckle ~~soft smiles Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-12-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
WhtDove did you say there was a love feast somewhere...care to share ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Maureen! Denise |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Your poetry is always so warm and beautiful Maureen. You seem to bring such wonderful reflections of tenderness to the printed page. I thoroughly enjoyed this! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Maureen, Bats eh? Do you happen to live in a castle, in the forest, in the moonlight? This poem that you have done is very pretty, and you can read it to me, over and over, at any time. But Maureen, I'm somewhat worried about you, bats in the belfry??????? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Sonnets are a special form of poetry. This is lovely. Kathleen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Jenn E and Corinne thank you for your beautiful words...I love writing and after months of releasing the most painful ones I am trying to stay with some a little more uplifting...and sonnets are that way.. ~~soft hugs and thanks Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Marsha soothing phrases and gentle tone....love the thought..thank you Denise and ethome beautiful..is the feeling I get from having been brought to this wonderful home of poets ~~soft thanks and smiles to all of you for such nice words Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Bill ...I get bats in my belfry once a year...this I hope was my once for this year you would hate to see a woman fall apart the way I can...when being dive bombed by a bat, sitting at the computer... ~~sighing..just glad I think their outta here...maybe ~~smiling now Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kathleen they are lovely to read ..I have another one in this series I may post soon...thank yo ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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jfilius Junior Member
since 2000-08-14
Posts 29 |
A very nice sonnet' im starting to think that you will be keeping me up all night reading. have you named your bat friends yet? John |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
jfilius if you are not careful, that may just happen... ~~softly smiling M * and no, I think they went on vacation |
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