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The pale light leaks...
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The pale light leaks... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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The pale light leaks from the lantern, The sky’s ablaze. I see the patterns Of clouds;-- happy faces and frowns, And black holes, where sight drowns, Imagination roams free and I’m there Also. Darkness reflects me. I stare At my skin, my eyes and my body. I’m naked. I wish that somebody Would bring me a towel. Alone I hear consonants hitting a stone, As though I’m held captive by walls,-- I knock on passing-by souls, Not a single soul opens. Gray fingers Reach for the bread. Eternity lingers To feed me, to give up mere seconds. The silent emptiness beckons Me to follow its trail. The burden Of time falls on my shoulders. The warden Dingles the keys on the chain, -- Mocking. Clouds burst. The rain Falls on the flame, -- lights’ out! I’ve re-gained my senses. Around Me, there’s just darkness and only The flame of the soul of the lonely Conscience, that burns inside Me, gives me the light. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Master~ A hauntingly good read ... 'The flame of the soul of the lonely Conscience, that burns inside Me, gives me the light.' Enjoyed the thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Make that twice the thoughts from MArge.. a double ditto ... Excellent work, no wonder you call yourself Master ... The name is justified... regards, sudhir |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
(shivers) Man this was a cold and chilling one. Sounds like a nightmare! Excellent use of words, to portray such feelings. Great job! <*\\\>< The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you. |
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