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Daniel_vv
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since 2000-06-28
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0 posted 2000-08-10 11:55 PM



Last Touch.

Angel,
why am I so alone?
Why do the days seem endless,
and the nights so cold.

Where have the stars gone?
I just need one
So I can wish her back,
Just tell her once more
that I love her so much.

I miss her, my dear angel
did God tell you why?
Why he stole my life,
what did I do wrong.

How can I forgive him,
what does he expect of me?
I am so confused...
I can't think anymore
I've forgotten how to breath
I just want to hold her again

Please bring her back
just for one last touch.

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Artistic
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 107
Colorado/Rochester, NY
1 posted 2000-08-11 12:15 PM


touched my heart... hope you do find your way once again and heal!  Beautiful poem.

~Artistic~

"Dreams are the touchstones of our characters"
-Henry David Thoreau

Daniel_vv
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since 2000-06-28
Posts 61

2 posted 2000-08-11 02:32 AM


Thnks Artistic
Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada
3 posted 2000-08-11 02:41 AM


Ah yes, How we all want that one last touch. Very beautiful sentiments here.  Oh How we miss the one we love.
Jenn E

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