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Nature's Beauty
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Nature's Beauty |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Leaving behind the effervecent night as the moon drops from the skies. Stroked with the mist of morning dew and the sun begins to rise. The bumble bees and butterflies hover and flutter all around. While the warble of the meadowlark resonates a wonderful sound. Standing in an open field of daisies growing there. A gentle breeze is blowing and music fills the air. As spring turns into summer and summer turns to fall. It never ceases to amaze me the beauty of it all. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I love to sit out in the middle of it all ... and soak up the serenity enjoyed your poem ... very nice  Rex |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This was so tranquil in it's nature. I loved it. OK, I am taking my glass of wine and going to sit on the grass and get lost the moon.....nature was ment to be enjoyed, thanks for the reminder. Be back in 15 min or so...LOL Jenn E |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
What a nice relaxing poem. I have read so many poems here about love and loss and I believe it is refreshing to read something a lil' bit different nice poem indeed |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
W O N D E R F U L! such a pretty poem W O N D E R F U L! great work, Eloise enjoyed this much! regards, sudhir |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you Rex. I only wished I had more time to sit and enjoy more of that serenity! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Jenn E, I do hope you enjoyed that glass of wine with the moon! You should have stayed longer than 15 minutes though! LOL Thank you for stopping by and reading. JnR4eva, thank you. I do appreciate the read. Sudhir, thank you so much. Your words mean alot. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, it is as beautiful as your poem! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ Oh, what a special touch to this beauty ! 'The bumble bees and butterflies hover and flutter all around. While the warble of the meadowlark resonates a wonderful sound.' I just want to run to the meadow and collapse in serenity ! WONDERFULLY RENDERED ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Denise and Marge, two of my favorite people. Thank you both so much. I'm glad you both enjoyed this. |
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