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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I would cease to write if I could have you to make a deal with god to always hold you. To no longer give meaning to any of my prose for my deal would be to have and to hold. For love I would do all this and more to sacrifice my words would not be a chore. So if you fear to what lengths I would do that small sacrifice made to show my love to you, |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Michael, This was so beautiful. Another poem that goes to show what an incredibly unselfish, giving, loving, tender beautiful man you are. I know that your inspiration must wake each morning with more love and respect for you then she did the day before. YOur poems are beautiful and so full of emotion, they all take my breath away. Thank you in more ways then I can ever explain...... As Always Jenn E |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Michael.... I must agree with Jenn on this one. You are a beautiful, caring person, and I wish you love always with your special One.... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
"In words I once loved you, then you stole my words left me alone, and now I have nothing to say...." Words are so dangerous, but for my love, I can only live in words. A great poem..... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yea....what Jenn said  tho im gonna be selfish and hope ya get what ya want without making that deal cause I would miss your words. BUT I so love the premise of this poems gift later-sweet-sacrifice-gator me There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Too write is in you my friend. You have a talent so many want and few have. Your gesture is true and from heart, but you are what you are ...........and Michael is a writer by nature and heart. I am sure she woulnd`t change if she could. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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