»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #9
»
Gone So Long
| Open Poetry #9 |
|
Gone So Long |
|
|
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
|
I've been reading between the lines again seeing through tear soaked eyes Locking away another page from our history book I did the giving, you always took And you've been coloring outside the lines again Tell me baby how have we been? 'Cause in my heart I've been gone so long And I can't even remember our wedding song And this fairytales gone on too long Got to find a resting place figure out where I belong 'Cause in my heart I knew it was all wrong I guess I knew too much about you You painted a perfect world for me you thought it would keep me there I found your world can be a bit cold Didn't want to hang around and grow old So it's over it's nothing I just stood there by your side still so lonely and I would sneak out to see him you knew where i was going never took your blinders off are all my friends this lonely? I needed more room had to figure it out I can't get it back and you couldn't tell when I looked in your eyes tearing out another page to shreds...... a mixture of pleasure and pain addicted to this drug so hard to go you had to know we were no good together a love and hate game and I may as well take the blame 'Cause in my heart I've been gone so long And I can't even remember our wedding song And this fairytales gone on too long Got to find a resting place figure out where I belong 'Cause in my heart I knew it was all wrong Julie :) |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Julie Ann Ferrer - All Rights Reserved | |||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JulieAnn~ 'Tell me baby how have we been?' Guess if one has to ask that question - the answer is .... pending ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
straight from the heart, as always! keep it up Julie!  Tony |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Goodness JulieAnn, I must come by more often aften reading the words that you have written. Again, I am glad that I stopped by. |
||
|
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you Marge for stopping by to reply...  Tony ~~ Thank you...I am so glad you stopped by to read this.....It just cam eto me in one of insomniac nights.....I have a hard time sleeping alot and the night sort of brings about alot of memories....Glad you liked it!!! Bill~~Thank you for stopping by....Gald you enjoyed it!!! Julie :) |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
CHeeeeezzzz!!!!--How did I miss this? I am so glad I caught up to it. This is a wonderful creation from you and I hope you find where you want to be soon. It isnt easy not knowing where to be but even harder yet not knowing where we WANT to be. Stick around some....we miss having you around so much |
||
|
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Mark~~~Yes yes!! I do need to come around more often.....two jobs don't leave much time!!! But I do miss it here!!! Well anyway I am glad you liked the writing!!! Thanks for reading!!! Julie :) |
||
|
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Julie, you know that the journey is just getting started. . . but. . . there are always those that will help you along the way. . . Excellent poem. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
||
|
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you Sven that is very sweet.... Julie :) |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
