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Petals Fall
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Petals Fall |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Petals fall but not too far The scent stays near its Mother dear Soon to bloom another one Join the others in soft array Velvet touch, misty drops Reach for the sun Such great fun Petals fall, but not too far Softly they lay Wish they would stay The wind blows... there they go Where? No one knows BR < !signature--> [This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 08-10-2000).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed your poem. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I enjoyed this image as well, nice poem. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
There's a subtlity with this - its more than petals - that I really like - a window to your soul - well done BR |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Welcome to the family of Passionate poets and friends. Several nice poems you've posted here today. Hope you enjoy your stay. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thank you all for the warm welcome and nice comments. I am enjoying all the reading. To write a poem is new to me, but to put to pen whatever is within, can't be so bad for the soul.  Debra BloomingRose |
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