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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2000-08-10 12:58 PM


Your love is like honey in a jar
Pure as gold, sweet to taste
I'll put the jar on a shelf
Leave it there, do you care?

I see the jar, it draws me near
Just one taste, thats all it takes
Put it on the shelf, I tell myself
Leave in there, don't you dare
It's too late to care




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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-08-10 01:08 PM


Hi BloomingRose...(what a pretty name)

       I love this poem!! It's as sweet as
       the honey in the jar.
           I'd also like to say
           "Welcome to Passions"
it's a great family here and I know you'll
          have lots of fun!!
< !signature-->

  I have only one goal
        in life..
         It Is:
    To have more than
       one goal in
          Life!!
    ~ ~ by Sunny ~ ~


[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-10-2000).]

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
2 posted 2000-08-10 05:07 PM


Twice in one day -- Now I'm learning - if you're the author - it will be a read I will really enjoy


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