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tori
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0 posted 2000-08-10 12:24 PM


The Last Sunrise
By: Tori Hoiser

In darkened waste it now remains
Forgotten like a drop of rain
Sitting on a memory shelf
Alone and sadden by its self

It comes to call with out request
Like a stain that lands upon the vest
And marks the spot it once upheld
Night filled with fire, straight from hell

As birds flew out of shadowed tree’s
I can feel the coldness from the breeze
That chill that drew me in your arms
A sight that seems to linger on

Hidden deep with in my soul
Flooded vision takes control
As I fight its entrance with all my might
I cannot alter from this sight
When fire burn the last of night

In the distance I see it rage
As it danced for us upon the stage
Its flames blending into the sky
In the still of a quiet lullaby

As gull’s sang out the song of blue
The fire lifted in wake of new
Into the sky its flames set free
And all that was; were you and me

Or so I thought when I was young
Back before my life begun
That when you held me by your side
We would greet each new tide

Now it comes with out request
Like that spot that lands upon the vest
And fill’s my mind a blue venue
Of the last sunrise spent with you

©tori June 2000





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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-08-10 12:31 PM


Great work, Tori. I enjoyed reading it. Nice memories with a touch of pain.

Elizabeth


Why ME???

Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-08-10 01:37 PM


Nice poem, it flowed really well
WhtDove
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3 posted 2000-08-10 09:28 PM


Tori this is AWESOME! You've written some great verse here girl! I'm glad to see you posted something finally  

Love ya  ~HUGS~

tori
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4 posted 2000-08-11 10:03 AM


Thanks Lake, and Rebeca... love you too girl )

If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
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Dark Angel
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5 posted 2000-08-11 10:07 AM


Awesome indeed Tori, loved it.
Wonderful writing  

BloomingRose
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6 posted 2000-08-11 10:53 AM


Tori
This really touched me. Seems I have been there before.


BloomingRose

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