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to love you |
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zipknee Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 35Oak Park, IL |
I love you with a passion undescribable I feel it in every heartbeat I need you with desires unfathomable I feel them in every kiss You cause a smile that is unmeasurable I get with every thought You send me to heights unreachable I travel with every embrace You have taught me a love unbreakable I feel with every I love you I will care for you with a love undestroyable I will hold in my heart forever |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
I like this, I like the form and the sincerity....the love just flows out of it, really nice poem  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
zipknee, I like this poem... it fits right in with my life and my feelings at the moment. This is the first poem I've seen from you.. I can't wait to see more rosepetals |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
There are times I find it very difficult to pen these deep feelings. You've done well here Zipknee expressing your feelings. It's unbearable to think of life with out this loved one isn't it? ~Sheri |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
And your poetry has reached levels unimaginable! This is awesome  |
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