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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2000-08-10 08:15 AM


"ROCKIN' SWEETHEART"

If you fell into my arms,
I would kiss you into bliss,
And then I would hold you so tightly,
To show you what you have missed.

I would make mad passionate love to you,
until you thought you were on another planet,
just like Mars.
I really mean something special, all night long,
happening in that great big delicious bed upstairs,
you know - the one that's ours?

I promise I would totally wear you out,
until you looked all frizzled and glub,
and you screamed "NO MORE SWEETHEART!"
                   That's when I said,
"Oh don't go away, I have special treats for you,
my wonderful special love!"

     "He, he, he,"
Your rockin' sweetheart, that's me!
Rolling on the floor and giggling with glee!

Enough is enough, but when is enough,
                      really enough?

"Ohhhhh my sweet honey bunnnyyy!!!
       Yoo-hoo, please don't you flee!"
It's just your sweetheart,
      and little lover,
           "ME!!!"


Bill Charles




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Wilfred Yeats
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1 posted 2000-08-10 08:38 AM


Semms to me she should accept your offer - What could be more straightforward? ~G~


rosepetals25
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2 posted 2000-08-10 10:54 AM


Bill,

   I like this fun poem!  hehe.. you made me smile this morning!    

                    rosepetals

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-08-10 11:53 AM


Hi Bill...
          Oh, yes,yes,yes!!! This was a
          special treat this morning!!
          Wonderfully penned and picturesque!
              Enough is Never Enough!!!


I have only one goal
in life..
It Is:
To have more than
one goal in
Life!!
~ ~ by Sunny ~ ~

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2000-08-10 07:48 PM


Wilfred,
Well, perhaps, but I was really worn out! Thanks for coming by.

Hi rosepetals25,
Well, I was just in a funny mood at the time.
He, he, he!!!

Sunny...
You are so right Sunny, enough is never! Thank you for coming by, and as always, wishing you the best.


MMoonchild
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5 posted 2000-08-10 08:34 PM


so cute, Bill... all those honey bunny sweetheart words...let's see I may have heard them here in 19...ummmm...ummmm..shoot can't remember

~~softly smiling
Maureen

ddgoose
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6 posted 2000-08-10 09:17 PM


Bill

My, my you want to make love to her and then chase her around ?  He he he he!  Very humerous poem - puts a smile on everybody's face!  

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2000-08-12 05:12 PM


MMoonchild
I am sorry that I haven't replied to you but I have been away for a couple of days. Thank you for your kind comments and yes, a few sweetheart words.

ddgoose
Hi "dd", I thought at the time that it was the proper thing to do, ha. Thank you for your kind words, and for smiling at this little poem.



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