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Pallet of Life
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Pallet of Life |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Pallet of Life Rainbows glow within our mind Of everything we left behind And all that in the present lies Shines prism colors in our eyes The dress she wore of crimson red Gleamed red of passion in his head And crimson streams of passion poured The night he saw the dress she wore The day of white, the day of veil A dress of white with lacy trail The moon of white the night they wed Streamed down on white of linen bed In bright of sunshine’s yellow rays Life’s own sweet treasures filled their days With cradle precious pastel hues Of baby pinks and baby blues Days of black and days of red And days of yellow lay ahead The greens of summer, crimson fall And always spring revived it all The joy and pain of all they had Were colors mixed on pallet’s pad But dreams still shown in prism rays Until the end of all their days Of all the shades of painted time The tones of love were most sublime Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 08-10-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ It doesn't surprise me that our thoughts of crimson run hand in hand this day. Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Liz, I do believe that Webster is going to have to add a few words to his dictionary as beautiful, lovely, and all the rest are just not enough anymore. Your words just never cease to amaze me. Bonnie |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, Yes we're in sync, and crimson is such a lovely color Bonnie, Thank you so much for your lovely comments Liz |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
most sublime indeed... Liz, This is a GRAND fiesta of lovely colours here... regards, sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Another epopee, We will name your book The epopee of poetry. Love Sy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh dear Elizabeth, I see you are once more painting pictures with your words....wonderfully done  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--A sunset rich with all the hues of a day with clouds in perfect view could never match the colors of the poetry of Liz's love! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Gasp !!..ooops, I mean my mouth fell open...LOL I do miss you guys and your words, big smiles here.. HUSG |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Liz, I would color this one love-er-ly. Beautiful, as usual. marcy |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
What an absolutely lovely piece you've writen here Elizabeth. I just adore it! As usual...your poems are always wonderful to read. I so much enjoyed this..... ~Sheri |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Days of sunsets and sunrises with rainbows in between are what you bring to us with your lovely imagery. You expound the depths of nature and life in a thousand wonderful ways and I appreciate you for doing so. Beautiful as usual and shining even more brightly. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
psst, Liz - if you really wanna shock everybody, write a poem that is NOT perfect - it would be a first for you - I'm amazed at how well you write every poem... you have a wonderful sense of flow and imagery. This poem is so well done. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sudhir, Thank you, my friend Sy, You warm my heart Ruth, I always appreciate your comments. THank you Martie, Thanks, dear friend Rainbow, How did I know you would like this one? It's always nice to hear from you Thanks, Cindy Marcy, You're so sweet, Thank you so much for your comment Irie, Your remarks are so much appreciated Mark,Such kind remarks. Thank you Mark, it means so much LngJhn, It's so good to have you on the forum, I hope you stay for a while Thanks for your kind words Liz |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
you rainbow painted out hearts today...this was beautiful Liz ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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