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Still Divined... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Is love but a delusion, Creation of man's mind? Nay, love is an illusion, A thought by gods divined. Illusion is reality, If born from in a heart, Becoming one existence, Once two that were apart. Love is called a passion's dance, I know that is not true, For oft as not, is just a glance, That says, dear, I love you. Love is waking in the night, And knowing something's wrong, Sensing that the one you love, Is not where she belongs. Going in the other room, And walking to her chair, Reaching out without a word, And touching on her hair. Love is when you aren't around, Keeping you inside, Feeling sorrow and your pain, The day your father died. Love is changing diapers, Mending skinned up knees, Teaching children manners, To ask for pretty please. College bound with tears farewell, Once more an empty nest, I fall asleep with you each night, Knowing I've been blessed. For nine and twenty wond'rous years, You have been my wife, Forever and forevermore, You are my love, my life. Is love but an illusion, Existing in my mind? You are my reality, A love that gods divined. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 08-10-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Divine thoughts, devined verse, my friend. Loved this. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike, you have brought tears to my eyes with this loving poem...and that doesn't happen often...this is so honest and real...and human. Your wife is very lucky to have your love and we are lucky that you are able to express it so perfectly. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a wonderful tribute to the realities of love as it grows into maturity. The way love was meant to be....accepting the responsibilities of being in love creates a lasting bond that is as powerful as death. I agree it is a divine arrangement. Great writing! I'm working on a poem called Back To Monogamy it's a reflection on the results of the new morality that has pervaded the mindset of society. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is beautiful, Mike...thanks for this...and so well-written that I am taking notes, once again. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mike... This is a beautiful poem and tribute from your heart to your wife of 29 years. It's so nice to see people still in love and happy. You are both very, very lucky. Thank you for sharing this! I have only one goal in life.. It Is: To have more than one goal in Life!! ~ ~ by Sunny ~ ~ |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You raised gooseflesh on my arms with this piece Tim. You are exceptionally lucky to have found one to share this with for life. This is what I have been looking for (and thought I had found once). Great writing my friend. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
 ... Either I've read this, or you're writing more great poems about your divine marriage... Nice job, Mike..  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Happy 29th Anniversary to you and your wife. Wonderful sentiments expressed here. I have a feeling you live them daily. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Awwwwww, now this was devine indeed. I applaud you on your marrige and the love you have shared over the years. That you can express this love in such a beautiful way is truly a gift. This was just so tender and sweet and flowing over with love....and you can never have to much of that now can ya! Jenn E |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, I'd say that's love! Beautiful, Mike! Denise |
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